An Update On ESL

I've been reading Eats, Shoots and Leaves. I'm not particularly fond of it per say, but over the past few days, I have found that it made an impact on the way that I look at the things around me. As I finish up my essay, I hope to be able to show this point. The book is successful in it's purpose, quite possibly because of the humor and rhetoric. ALSO, if someone could clarify the proper way to punctuate "hes and shes" that'd be great. :)